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                You might find time to check out a couple of those sites and tell me when there is one that maybe I could make more useful or enjoyable for you.

                Thank you for your visit. Thank you for reading!




                                                                                Richard 
                


Readers of These Associated Blogsites

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                    They seem ordinary, but they are not interested in hashing over the same old stuff. Their minds are hungry.

                    Many have some college. Some have post graduate degrees. They seem to be more curious than most and to be life-long-learners. They have an urge to explore. They even learn to explore certain blogs.

                    They are often interested in some facets of science and to have imaginations which tend to be realistic. A significant number of them are interested in kinds and sorts of history. They want to get to the real story. They are interested in sociology even when they are not exactly sure of what it is. A few have considered the nature of governance. They can also be interested in new thoughts related to world affairs. Others are happily married.

                    Often they are interested in getting the back story of the news and other happenings, and often don't tell me so.

                    They believe in the importance of personal communication and find face to face communication attractive. They are often ready to learn more, to understand much more, and to be interested in meanings of some depth.

                    Health can be an important interest of theirs, both public health and personal health. They are often interesting people interested in personal development. Many love reality, reality, and clear thinking. Some find the possibilities of  interactivity of blogs interesting. An important few are willing to help me to present good content well, to correct my errors, to ask questions, to make comments on content. I appreciate them.

                    Most visitors have used several of the apps available on these blogs to make their searches, explorations, readings and viewing of essays and videos more pleasant and effective. Some find that these applications support their intuitive explorations. 

                    Some few are coming to appreciate the ease of moving back an forth from one of these associated blogs to another.

                    More and more are beginning to visit the timeline blogs. Others find a home base blog from which to explore. One may feel at home at Mago Bill, another at Dialogue With RCS and another at History With RCS because they like the pre-history there. Recently I have been beginning at the Governance blog, but I may start using the Writing With RCS site as my home-base.

                    It is my wish that you enjoy your visits. 
           
                   I enjoy your comments on details of content the most, these days.

                  Thank you for reading.



                                                                                    Richard    










They know that their are truly wonders of reality.

Developmental Process

Writing is a Developmental Process 

                    It can be useful to consider the growing of your writing a developmental process. Your writing could suddenly get better, or even great, but neither is a good bet. However, when you keep writing and pay attention to the quality of that writing, you will begin to note changes occurring, some for the better. You can congratulate yourself. Consider the nature of the changes for the better and aim to accentuate the positive.


Kicked Back Writer

                    You can be relaxed enough. You can be abundantly relaxed. If you are not procrastinating, you may be relaxing just enough. If you are also writing, you are doing relaxed writing. There is no law against being a kicked back writer. Relaxed writing is often very good writing, and it is relaxing!


Changes

                    Your writing can change others and it does change you. Its a natural process. Your writing does not change alone, it also changes you, mostly for the better. As you practice your writing , as you write, your thinking changes, you come to behave differently, and to see happenings and life differently! To ripen and mature your writing, you cultivate it. This cultivating is les like high culture and more like caring for one's garden. Relaxed persistence and attention does the trick.

Do

                    Do avoid wasting time. You can sketch in a draft roughly; you can move fast when doing so feels OK. You can let your commitment and investment feel light. doing so does take some commitment. It pays to spend enough time and effort to make this draft a kind of complete version of that which you want to express. It can turn out to seem a mess, but it is your mess and there is almost certainly some good stuff in it. don't throw it a way yet.

                Try thinking of your words as though they are able to grow. Let them grow, allow them the energy they need to grow. Send energy through through your words. Relaxed is good, but you want to do too. Give your words life  energy to continue. You are cooking. You may already know that with attention you come to to the cooking, growth, and development.

Organizing  Words

                If you see your words coming into small piles and interacting you are most likely not crazy. Bundling is happening. It is a natural doing among us humans and an efficient doing. It is very likely that you are becoming more conscious of the process of writing. Attend and you may see those words separate and form new little piles according to some organizing pattern. The small piles consolidate and shake down into their best organization. They move together again into a big pile and work until a different pattern pattern emerges. This may repeat 4 or 5 times until you are satisfied or until it feels right.


As You Grow

                Your writing has undergone changes, so have you. Some of those changes will help your future writing be better.

                Onwards. 

                Let the new idea or perception finally take shape. Let go of the old perception and your writing grow. Some of your writing will seem bad this month and this year; accept that and see also that much of your writing shows improvement. As you grow your writing grows and as your writing grows, so do you.

Keep Writing

                Start writing and keep writing through great or little disorientation and chaos on to an organizing center of gravity; then go on to wrapping up and editing. Remember that is often best to complete a paragraph or more be foe considering the major rewriting of anything. Take time to reread your writing when you are rested, calm, and relaxed. You will find stinking poop from time to time. You will also find some truly fine writing. Pay attention to it. Then I try to destroy the stinking part before anyone else can see it. It is better to use it to point you you to the best of that which you were trying to say, Doing so might lead you to some of your best writing.

                We could be beginning a process of  satisfying life-long learning, cooking, and and maturing one draft at a time. We might call it a process of development.

                Thank you for reading.



                                                                                        RCS
  

Commentes

                     I am very sorry, but as you may have noticed, our comments app has been taken. I have tried restarting and reinstalling but found I was unable to regain that application in that way. So far I have found no pertinent help elsewhere.

                    I want this blog to interactive and would be very pleased to be in contact with you. You may contact me at email address:  magobil@gmail.com

                    Also the "comments" app is still available on several associate blogs.

                    When using either of these contact methods please do the following:

1) Provide the name of the blogsite your message relates to.

2) Provide the name of the specific post at the site you refer to.

3) Tell me how to respond to you.


                    I would like the opportunity to try to be responsive to your likes and interests in future posts. To that end I need to know more about your likes and interests. Specifics can be helpful.

                Thank you for reading and for your visi.



                                                                                            Richard

Writing Without a Teacher

               This essay has been enjoyed by many readers at our Mago Bill Blog.

               Learning to write without a teacher may be effectively done and enjoyed.

                It has been done in groups of from 5 to 17 participants. Basically, the members each commit to reading the writing of a member then to coming together with the other members to share their feelings about what they have read. 

                Hearing what others have felt as they read your works has proven a great help to improving one's writing and a powerful experience in itself.

                Its fair, and often useful, to ask questions here.

                Every member reads one specified piece of  writing of one member of the group. Then in a gathering of all the members each member tells about how she felt as she read the piece.

                This telling of feelings is done at nearly every meeting of the group.

                The bit below is about what I have learned from my experience and from Mr. Elbow. It is something that I might offer at an appropriate moment in the gathering of my group.

                On the horizon, a Final Draft 

                Once you have some writing from which it seems you can coax some coherence, you may be close to the point at which to edit and turn out a final copy.

            Take 15 minutes to make your meaning clear to yourself.

                You might let yourself consider an outline or plan.

                Sum up what you have into a genuine single assertion of what your meaning is. Not easy, but possible. Remember that your assertion must actually assert something that can be quarreled with.

                You have grown your meaning and specified it to yourself clearly. Good for you. Your efforts and good thinking will give you a good chance to do some truly powerful writing.

                Let me add that a very great deal of writing skill can be learned without a group. Even so, groups have often proven a great aid to great writing.

                As I am doing some reminding, let me remind you that this blogsite is meant to be interactive. There are connections here to other sites. Also from here you can connect to me and to other readers here.

                Thank you for reading.



                                                                            by Richard Sheehan
                                                                            for you.


Writing Makes Us Writers

                             When you want to be a writer, write. Start writing and keep writing. Your writing makes you a writer. When our object is to write we don't have to be perfect, but it is good to be good.

                        So, write something. Consider taking ten minutes to write a paragraph. Write something about what you would like to write about.

                        I used to use a timer when I wrote and found it helpful in several ways. For example, I found myself stopping to make corrections or to rewrite so often that I lost my line of thought and wasted time. So, I set my timer to ring in five minutes and did not stop for anything until I heard that ring. Then, if I felt like it I made corrections or changes. I also found that it helped to have the nature of a pararagraph somewhere near the conscious level of my mind. Neither of these doings is completely necessary. Certain doings are more important as you begin to write. Having a table and chair handy may prove helful. Pencil and paper and your glasses at hand may be a good idea. Maybe a computer with a speech to print app at hand and warmed up could make your writing flow more easily.

                    For this writing do not stop to make corrections or to edit. Just keep writing. Do not go back to read or anything. Just write. This practice can help you to accomplish writing.

                        When we are note-taking or writing a first draft it is often best not to take time for editing, improving word choice, or executing excelent  punctuation. You may write more efficiently when you complete such acts in your final draft or your penultimate one. It's OK to change your mind, but often best to express that which is on your mind at first. Which is often a more efficient way of writing. Later you can look over your writing and get a better idean of wht you were trying to get at. Seems that I have writen elsewhere recently that that we grow and develp as we write.

                        Well, did you write for five or ten minutes, relax for a while and then read what you have written. If so you can make additions and corrections as you like. Congratulations. Relax for a minute or five. You have written. You are a writer.

                        Now reread what you have written. Don't throw it away yet. You may get a surprisingly use idea from it which you can use right now or later.

                        If  you still feel like writing, do it. You can make your corrections and additions. Maybe you made a wrong meaning in a wrong word. You can double check the meanings of the words you are not completely sure of. This could be a good learning experience for you and good the the meaning and clearity of your paragraph. It could even help your reader to get that which you want her to understand or feel.

                        One changes as one writes. One's writing changes as one changes. We grow and develop as we write and our writing grows and and develops as we do so. 

                        Your most embarrasing paragraph or sentence can contain a gem or seed from great writing. Where you see the possibility for that gem or seed make a stab at bringing it out, clearifying it, or even making it shine and grow.

                    I am so old now that I am losing skill faster than I am learning. Even so, I am remember ing some past experience. After three or so of the writings were were just talkng about and if you have saved that which you have written, you'll have a pile of rubble. When you look over that rubble try not to over look seeds and gems. You are nearly sure to find words, phrases, and a sentence or two which seem important.

                    Use some careful thought and editorial discrimination to see what your words, pharses, and sentences add up to. Decide how much you believe them. Arrange them somehow so that the make sense. write some new and connecting parts if you wish.

                        We could call this your first real draft. We could also say that you have begun your career as a practiced writer. Congratulations!

                        When you feel like writing more you may find that when you keep alert to finding an "an emergent center of gravity" as you write, you may find one.

                        That emergent center may help you to more clearly see what you are writing about. Clarifying what you are writing about is often a big help. I am remembering now that at this point I sometimes found that which I thouht ought to be the beginning of a paper ought to end it and what I thought ought to end it was better as a beginning.

You can find the following as aids to finding and clearifying that center of gravity:

~ As you write you may honestly come to say, "Ah, now I see what I have been getting at." Pay attention.

~ Finish what you are writing about. Put it aside for a time. See useful implications as you look it over again.

~ See that your good idea is crap. Then see tat part of it is les crappy. Sort out the good parts from the bad. You don'thave to throw anything away. You may come to see that some of it is better than your favorite idea.

~ Your first writing may be good scaffolding fir your next writing.

~ You can find a powerful spark in a tiny digression of yours. You may keep the same elements of your work, but change the whole orientation for the better. 

~ See your work improve as you improve. See yourself improve as your work improves. 

~ As you progress in a piece of writing, be alert to an emerging focus or theme. Its OK to let your focus ortheme improve.

~ If notheing emerges in a piece you are writing, sum up thar which you have written, then sumit up again.

~ Push yourself a bit to keep getting some center of gravity or summing-up to occur. 

~ Work gradually toward moderation from extreme positions. If you feel you must be immoderate in a given case, make sure that you are being extremely honest and realistic.

~ Its fair and good to explain your position and its source.

~ Keep writing.


                    It is possible to learn a lot by helpimg others to develop their craft. That could be done in a writing group or you may do it by your suggestions or examples in the "comments" section below. Share an experience, information, or understanding. Pass it on here. You can even ask a question. You can help me by proof reading this piece and making sugestions or correcting my spelling. This is  a way to be a published writer!

                    Thank you for reading and thank you for writing.



                                                                                                rcs



"Spellcheck" and "comments"

                 The spellcheck and comments apps have been taken from this blog as they have been taken for my Governance With RCS blogs and other blogs of mine! My Esoteric to Exoteric has lost its spellcheck app but still has its "comments" app.

                You may use the comments app at Esoteric to Exoteric to make comments intended for any of the associated blogs from which the "comments" app has been removed. 

                Be sure begin your comment with a notice nameing the the blog and post for which the comment is intended and refers to.

                I have lost the spellcheck from a dozen blogs and have found no way to get them back. Now I have already lost about that many Comments apps!! I could really use some help! If you know of a way to finding help please tell me about. "Settings" on my dashboard no longer works to reset spellcheck. I have found no help at all from Blogspot "help" or "send feedback!"



                                                                                                    Richard


Imagening a Final Draft

                   Review the brief reminders below.
                You may be well on your way to a solid draft.

                You have probably grown your meaning and begun to specify it to yourself. Good for you. Your thoughtful efforts are giving you a good chance to complete some powerfully effective writing. 

                You have reached the point where at it is time to consider the steps to take to complete a great draft. Now can be the time to move forward toward publishing a darn good piece. 

                Calmly consider the foll0wing suggestions:

A: Now you are likely to have written that from which you can coax some true coherence. Great! From here you can complete this draft and begin the next one.

B: Take some time to see that our main meaning is clear to you.

C: Let yourself do some growing and cooking.

D: Sum up that which you have written into a genuine assertion central to what you have to say. Perfection is not necessary, but do remember that your assertion must assert that which can be quarreled with. Done? You may be more than half way to a fine finished work.

E: You can let yourself reconsider an outline or overall plan. It may not be necessary, but it could be a useful consideration.

                You are well on your way to submitting a meaningful piece of work to publish. You can be nearly ready to put your name to a good post or essay. Congratulations!

                Keep writing.



                                                                                                            rcs


Writing As a Developmental Process


                      Consider the your writing as a developmental process which grows and develops you.

                        Your writing could suddenly get better, or even great, but neither is a good bet. However, when you keep writing and pay some attention to the quality of that writing, you will begin to note changes occurring, some for the better.  You can congratulate yourself, consider the nature of the changes for the better, and aim to accentuate the positive.

                        You can be relaxed enough. You can be abundantly relaxed. If you are not procrastinating, you may be relaxing just enough. If you are writing, you may be doing relaxed writing. There is no law against being a kicked back writer. Relaxed writing can be very good writing.

                        Writing can be very much a natural process. Your writing doesn't just grow by itself, it also changes you, mostly for the better. As you practice your writing, as you write, you come to think differently, behave differently, and to see happenings differently. To ripen and mature your writing, you can cultivate it. Cultivating is less like high culture and more like caring for one's garden. Relaxed persistence and attention does the trick.

                         Do avoid wasting time. You can sketch in a draft roughly; you can move fast when doing so feels okay. Let your commitment and investment be light. Doing so does take some commitment. It can pay to spend enough time and effort to make this draft a kind of complete version of what you want to express. It could turn out to be a mess, but it is your mess and you could find some good stuff in it. Don't threw it away yet.

                        Treat your words as though they are able to grow. Let them grow, allow them the energy they need. Send energy through your words. Relaxed is good, but you want to do. Give your words life energy to continue. You are cooking. You may already know that with attention you come to see growth  and development.

                        If you come to see your words come into a small pile and interact, you may be mad. Most probably you are not. It is likely that you are becoming conscious of the process of writing. Attend, and you may see those words separate and form new little piles according to some energizing pattern. The small piles consolidate and shake down into their best organization. They move together together again into a big pile and work until a different pattern emerges. This may repeat 4 or 5 times until you are satisfied or until it feels right.

                        Your writing has undergone changes; so have you. Some of those changes will will help some of your future writing to be better then ever!

                        Onward. Let the new idea or perception finally take shape. Let go of the old perception and let your writing grow. Some of your writing will seem bad this month and this year; accept that and see also that much of your writing shows improvement. As you grow, it grows; and as it grows, so do you.

                        Start writing and keep writing through great disorientation and chaos and on to an organizing center of gravity; and then go on to wrapping up and editing. Remember to complete a paragraph or more before considering the rewriting of anything. Take time to reread your writing when you are rested, calm, and relaxed. You will find stinking poop. You will also find some writing of which you can be proud. Pay attention to it. For my part, I then try ro destroy the stinking part before anyone else can see it.

                        You have begun that which may become an ongoing process of learning, cooking, an maturing, one draft at a time. 

                        Thanks for reading. 

 

 

                                                        RCS

                

                        

 


Start Writing

  For now, try this:

                Write without stopping to worry, correct, or edit. A way to better writing is practice.  A way to practice is to start writing and to keep writing for more than five minutes without stopping. You will write some phrases you will really love. You will find it hard to throw them away.


                Be ready to to throw them away because  they probably won't fit the writing you end up with. If you don't come up with a whole new focus or angle, you will probably come up with a whole new subject.

                Before you do throw away what have written do this: Read it and pick out your best three or four best sentences. Then reread them. As you do so consider improvements you might make in them. Rewrite them and save them for a while.




                                                                                                Richard Sheehan


Practice

 

Writing: a way to better writing is practice

 A way to practice is to start writing and to keep writing.

     

                For now try this: Write without stopping to worry, correct, or edit. Write for more than five minutes without stopping. You will write some phrases you will really love. You will find it hard to throw them away.

                Be ready to to throw them away because  they probably won't fit the writing you end up with. If you don't come up with a whole new focus or angle, you will probably come up with a whole new subject.

                Before you do throw away what have written do this: Read it and pick out your best three or four best sentences. Then reread them. As you do so consider improvements you might make in them. Rewrite them and save them for a while.

                Oh no! Did you already throw them away!




                                                                                                Richard Sheehan






 

Writing Skills

 Writing  Skills

 

We are born with talents.
Skills are developed and maintained with practice.
Writing is a skill.  

As an aid to improving your writing skills you can keep a free-writing diary as a practice tool. You may also find that it is a great source of writing ideas.

Keep your free-writing in a private diary, journal, or notebook. No one but you need ever read a word you put there. In that private place you can write whatever you want in any way you want to.

You are likely to be very uninterested that I have gotten much inspiration
for this post and others like it From Peter Elbow's book WRITING WITHOUT TEACHERS. 

"Free-writing" is writing without judgement or criticism. Do no editing, corrections, or rewrites. All there is to it is to do it.

Do not throw away what you have free written. You can use it to discover subjects you can enjoy writing more about.

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In your notebook, journal, diary, write. Produce a finished piece of writing. Keep a topic in mind. Digressions are okay, but when you find yourself digressing in this practice bring yourself gently back to the topic.

Digression are to be honored and respected. After all they do come from your beautiful mind. 
The idea in this practice is to keep writing. Do not stop writing. Do not stop for anything but the most serious and urgent reason. 

You may say to yourself "Let's remember the topic," but do not let a little digression of yours bother you.  Do very gently practice the discipline of keeping the topic in mind as you honor and value your digressions. 

It does seem that we writers are very much about digressions. They may lead us to our best writing. Still we do not want them to keep us from finishing a piece of work. 

As an aid toward helping myself to finish a piece of work I have told myself to write down everything I can think about the topic at the moment. 

Keep Writing.

Later you can look for your digressions in you work above.  Do another writing exercise based on your digressions. Let your digressions enrich your writing. Your  digressions may give you topics that motivate the real you.



                                                                                                rcs

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                                                            RCS
  

Writing Effectively

 Write With RCS: You can get value from this video                                                 

                                Who you are writing to is important. Writing develops your thought, but you are writing for your readers. Your readers want your  writing to be valuable, you benefit by wanting it to be valuable too.              

          

 

                                                                    rcs            

It's Called Writer's Block

Write RCS: We get stuck. I get stuck. Writers get stuck. Writers get unstuck.

            Writers get unstuck!  We can get unstuck with better feedback. An excellent source of good feedback is a writing group. Your own writing group like the ones I've written of in other posts, is more helpful than most casual conversations and usually less threatening. A search for "writing" and "groups" and "writing groups" may come up with something interesting.

If you have writers block right now, try :

  • thinking about the meaning, not the words, of what you are about to write helps. Think about your meaning, then find the best words.
  • taking some time to consider what is going on with you
  • just resting a bit.
  • completing some business.

Doing the following has gotten writers unstuck:

~ Look for contrasting or conflicting elements in what you have written or about to write. 

You can interact with those elements when you find them. Just finding an example of one such element and naming it can help.

~ Try just babbling on in you writing. You may find yourself being not so nice or less agreeable than usual. You might even begin talking back to yourself. Try not to shut yourself down too fast. Let each voice say what it has to say in your writing. Let each argument build a bit. Don't stop yet. Let each voice make it's point.

~ I get  frustrated and imagine that you do too. Let their movement, some movement. Again let let each and every voice have it's say before you shut it down. No one is looking. Some writing may occur.

~ Try more meaning before words. Develop the meaning of the words you are using. Clarify those meanings. Fit word to meaning.

~ Keep writing even if you only write why your writing doesn't make sense. Keep writing for 10 or 20 minutes. Then try to get yourself to step back and look at what you have written with some perspective. You may discover that you have written verbless phrases or that nothing you asserts anything. A few verbs and a couple of assertions may improve your writing. 

~ Sit back. Look at your writing and try to see what it adds up to. Going back and forth between immersing yourself in your writing and then sitting back to gain perspective is writing. As Mr. Elbow says, "You are cooking."


~ At times it is good to let yourself get a bit extreme, to be emotional. Let each impulse have its day. Sometimes it seems that one has a cycle to go through before you get down to better writing. Such a time may well be the time to take to extremes for a while. Take it to the limit one more time. Later you can be the ruthless editor with a sharp knife.  
 
            I get stuck less these days. When I do get stuck, I know what I can do to get unstuck pronto.


            Write us a comment below. Bye for now.


                                                                   by R. Carroll Sheehan


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A Writing Center of Gravity

Write With RCS: An Approach to a Center of Gravity.    

      The list below includes many of the ways I have gathered for getting a center of gravity or unifying theme to emerge in one's writing. The ways I included below were inspired by Peter Elbow's book, Writing Without Teachers.
 

Toward identifying your unifying theme:

  1.  Start writing X because it seems more believable than Y. Note as you write X what you begin to understand about Y.
  2. Continue your struggle with X and Y and see Z come up.
  3. As you write along you may honestly say, "Ah, now I see what I have been getting at."
  4. Finish what you are writing. Put it aside for a time. See useful implications as you look it over again.
5. See that your good idea is crap. Then see that some part of the crap looks a lot less crappy. You sort out good part from the bad. You don't have to throw it away. In fact, some of it is better than your favorite idea.

6. See your first writing providing a good scaffolding for your next writing. Consider the function of scaffolding. 

7. You find a powerful spark in a tiny digression. You keep the same elements but change the whole orientation for the better. 

8.As you progress in your writing be alert to emerging focus of theme.

9. If nothing emerges, sum up what you have written, then sum it up again. 

10. Push yourself a bit to keep getting a center of gravity or summing-up to occur. Reconsider the nature of a center of gravity.  

11. Work gradually toward moderation from extreme positions.


            And like that.
 
            Keep writing.

                                       

                                                                                        Richard 



 

Writing With or Without Your Group

Write With RCS: We get unstuck and we write

                We get unstuck.  An aid for getting unstuck is feedback. An excellent source of feedback is a writing group. Your own writing group, like ones I've written of in other posts on this blog, is more helpful than most casual conversation and often less of a threat. Taking some time to consider what is going on with you is also a help and so is just some rest. Taking care of some personal business may free up your writing. Often thinking about the meaning, not the words, of what you are about to write helps.

You can also try the following to get your writing to flow:

~ Look for contrasting or conflicting elements in what you have written or are about to write. You can interact with those elements when you find them. Just finding an example of just one such element and naming it can help. 

~ Try just babbling in you writing. You may find yourself being not so nice or less agreeable than usual. You might even begin talking back to yourself. Try not to shut yourself down too fast. Let each voice say what it has to say in your writing. Let each argument build a bit. Don't stop yet. Again, let each voice have it's say.

~ Of course you get frustrated; me too. Let there be some movement. Again, let each and every voice have it's say before you shut it down. No one is looking. Some writing may occur.

~ Try more meaning before words. Develop the meaning of the words you are using. Clarify those meanings. Fit word to meaning. 

~ Keep writing even if you only write why your writing doesn't make sense. Keep writing for 10 or 20 minutes. Then try to get yourself to step back and look at what you have written with some perspective.  You may discover that you have verbless phases, or that nothing you have written asserts anything. A few verbs and a couple of assertions may improve you writing.     

 ~ Sit back. Look at your writing and try to see what it adds up to. Going back and forth between immersing yourself in writing to gain some perspective is writing. As Mr. Elbow says, "You are cooking."

~ At times it helps to let yourself get a bit extreme. Be emotional. Let each impulse have it's day. Sometimes it seems that one has a cycle to go through before you can get down to better writing.  Such a time may well be the time to take to extremes for awhile. Take it to the limit one more time. Later you can be a ruthless editor with a sharp knife.


                By reading, even rereading essays on this blog  you can find some help for you and your writing.



                                                            by Richard Sheehan